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Thursday, 23 November 2017

Athletics story

Athletics


First the year ones lined up on the  line the boys went first Clap! Mrs Castle Smashed the clappers together.


After what seemed hours. It was my turn I was to run.
I was nervous my hands were shaking like boulders ready to fall off a mountain. Lined up beside me was Selu, Anita, Erana, Serenity, Maria and Fou. Bang ! the clappers go.All the girls ran the 100m sprint. I was trying my hardest to come first but Anita was zooming down the track like it was a piece of cake. We crossed the line I came second.


I was so hot and tired I just wanted to go for a cold swim.


“Anita first, Princess second, Serenity and Erana in third place.” Shouted Mrs Ahfook, as we crossed.


After the races and races and relays and the parents race it was time for the medals “Yr6 girls, in first place is Anita and in second is Princess and Erana and Serenity are third place.”


“I got a silver medal yeah.”

I was so proud.

1 comment:

  1. Congratulations Princess on your second place! Also, thank you for sharing your wonderful story of the race. You used very expressive language which made your experience come alive.

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