My Opinion on Donald Trumps decision on building a wall to stop Mexicans from crossing the American-Mexican boarder.
I strongly disagree with what he is doing it is super racists and unfair to the families that are trying to cross they are just trying to start new lives and get a better job to feed their families.
Donald Trump might think he is doing good, but he is not making America great at all.
I strongly think they should elect a new President of the United States of America that will actually do good for their country. He only thinks about him self not the country that he is president of witch I do not like, he is a greedy man and he is not a good man.
I really hope something is done about this man what a disgrace.
Hey Princess
ReplyDeleteI'm Daniel from the Kootuitui Summer Learning Journey team and I'm excited to start commenting on your blog posts this week and over the summer.
It’s great to see your opinion about the issue, it is certainly a complex one. But you have to express your strong opinion with lots of passion as it is clear to see how you feel about the topic. Your writing is very convicted and persuasive and you’ve given good reasons why you think it is not a good idea by referring to the families that will be heavily affected by this decision.
It’s great to see you are passionate about this and you disagree strongly but be careful to still be respectful online and to not attack the person even if they are famous all will not see it. I think most of your comments are fine up till the second to last line. Even then, I was pleased to see you have held back and tried to be respectful, just need to dial back a little bit more and I’d be happy to give this full points next week.
One other thing to really make sure you get lots of points over the holidays is to make sure that you attribute any image you use from the internet by writing or hyperlinking to where you get them from.
I’m looking forward to seeing more awesome work like this from you this week and throughout the holidays. Remember that week 1 of the SLJ program starts on the 16th of December to start earning those points.
Daniel